http://fish.blogs.nytimes.com/2009/08/31...ch-part-2/
Other thoughts: http://forum.koohii.com/showthread.php?p...2#pid64802 and http://forum.koohii.com/showthread.php?tid=3751
Stanley Fish Wrote:... That research, according to Dee, shows that “teaching grammar out of context” is ineffective, in part because, as writer teacher observes, “students are afraid that they aren’t abiding by the rules.”I'm pretty much in agreement with what's quoted above, if I interpret it as an example of how to learn grammar formally yet descriptively, using genuine content/context as a tool to supplement the identification and deconstruction of these forms so that they can be reproduced easily in new contexts. Of course, the question goes back to how or whether to integrate this into classrooms, how to define and combine the 'expert' and the 'user'.
If that is what is meant by teaching grammar — memorizing rules and being always afraid of breaking them — I agree. If the effect of instruction is to make students fear that they are walking through a minefield of error and that at any moment they are going to step on something that will wound them, the odds of their learning anything are small.
The research that led Richard Braddock, Richard Lloyd-Jones and Lowell Schoer to conclude in 1963 that “the teaching of formal grammar has a negligible . . . even a harmful effect on improvement in writing,” is no doubt correct but beside my point; all it proves is that “drilling students on parts of speech” (McLoughlin) doesn’t work. What does work, I have found, is something quite different: drilling students in the forms that enable meaning; and these are not inert taxonomic forms, but forms of thought.
A small example. Let’s say I’m teaching the neither/nor form. I begin by producing a simple neither/nor sentence. “Neither his age nor his disability prevented him from competing.” I then ask my students to write their own sentences on that model. Most of them are able to do it, and they produce sentences with 20 different contents, but only one form. The next step is for the students to figure out what that form is. Just how does a neither/nor sentence organize items and actions in the world?
It takes a while to work that out, but in not too much time students are able to explain that the form organizes three components: two conditions (age and disability) and the resolution (to compete) in relation to which they may have presented an obstacle, but did not. The important thing students learn, in addition to being able to generate neither/nor sentences forever, is that the relationship among those components, whatever they are, is always the same: two assertions that have a relationship to each other combine to highlight the unlikeliness of an action or an attitude.
Notice that this is an abstract and purely formal account of the matter and that it will fit innumerable narratives (and a narrative is what a neither/nor sentence is). While the content is variable and abundant — as David Berman says, “content is everywhere” — the form is unvarying. It follows then that what students must learn are the forms; the content will follow. A neither/nor sentence, or an even-though sentence or a nevertheless sentence, or a thousand other forms that can be studied and mastered — these do not clothe an antecedent content; they make it possible; they are not brought in to adorn a story; they are the story. In short — and I borrow this phrasing from my book editor Julia Cheiffetz — in learning how to write, it’s not the thought that counts.
Other thoughts: http://forum.koohii.com/showthread.php?p...2#pid64802 and http://forum.koohii.com/showthread.php?tid=3751
Edited: 2009-09-01, 11:41 am
