Nuriko Wrote:http://www.snapvine.com/bp/dAuU2A8FEd-bZQAwSFxytA
Anyone care to critique my latest?
I want to know the (probably many) things that keep me from sounding like a native speaker!
Sounds quite good, asides from the general flow in places, but I'm sure a bit more shadowing will solve that. By the way, did you solve that 「冒険を」problem? Somebody mentioned that you were saying it like 「ぼうけの」. I think this comes from the temptation to get your tongue involved with ん, but it's a nasal sound that doesn't require your tongue at all. Try saying words like 全員, 店員, 便利, 完了 and 運用. If you get your tongue involved for the ん, you'll mispronounce them to a point that makes them hard to understand.