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Stories you are proud of

#1
We might post an amazing story that makes us feel incredibly smug, but it'll most likely get buried under all of the other stories. So post some stories that made you crack a smile when you thought of them.

Here's mine for reed (242)

In Super Mario Bros, I wish I could pick a *fire flower* so I could kill that laughing *dog* that hid in the reeds whenever I missed killing a duck. I hate that dog, so much.

Yours?
Edited: 2008-06-30, 9:03 am
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#2
My latest surprise was ihatobu 's story for annexed :

Quote:Hawaii is a little drop of *heaven* nestled in the *waters* of the Pacific, most often visited by honeymooners and *valentines*. It was annexed to the U.S.A. in 1959, and more recently to Japan as well-- albeit only unofficially, and through private commercial holdings.
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#3
I am more proud of my primatives. I thought outhouse was terrible so I replaced it with Gnome King (small + crown + mouth) such as 掌
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#4
Yeah, I'm not sure what story I'm most proud of. Favor is popular, but I like my "Equip" story.

For primitives, I found using Frodo of the Shire (Rice Seedling and Earth) and Frodo of the Fellowship (Rice Seedling and Walking legs) worked great as those six Rice Seedling kanji were IMPOSSIBLE for quite some time. Can't remember if I thought of it, or used someone else's.
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#5
samesong, your story is cool, but you could make it even better by fixing one primitive: it's not "dog" but "pack of wild dogs" (unless you changed that voluntarily). I'm sure you will get starred if you make that minor change.
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#6
攻. Christian Bale dropping an I beam (instead of a chainsaw) onto a nun (I changed the primitive from taskmaster) from the top of a long flight of stairs while naked. (Ok, so not all of you will get the reference.)
Edited: 2008-07-02, 11:37 am
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