could someone please check this sentence for me,
its needed for a very short monologue in a film...

夢の中にある、私とﾎﾞｰﾙ｡

and can it be pronounced...
ゆめ　の　なか　に　ある、ぼく　と　ﾎﾞｰﾙ。

??

Many thanks in advance :o)

私 is pronounced わたし in that sentence. The kanji for ぼく　would be 僕.

If I am understanding your intended meaning for this sentence, it feels more natural to me to leave out ある, as in, 「夢の中に、僕とボール」.

Ah, of course! Brilliant! Thanks so much!