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please help with film monologue... - torida - 2008-04-10
could someone please check this sentence for me,
its needed for a very short monologue in a film...
夢の中にある、私とﾎﾞｰﾙ｡
and can it be pronounced...
ゆめ の なか に ある、ぼく と ﾎﾞｰﾙ。
??
Many thanks in advance :o)
please help with film monologue... - shaydwyrm - 2008-04-10
私 is pronounced わたし in that sentence. The kanji for ぼく would be 僕.
If I am understanding your intended meaning for this sentence, it feels more natural to me to leave out ある, as in, 「夢の中に、僕とボール」.
please help with film monologue... - torida - 2008-04-11
Ah, of course! Brilliant! Thanks so much!