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Can someone straigthen out my translations? - luke9t - 2014-03-01

This took me sometime and i know there's still lots of parsing errors i made, please make it more literal. Thanks.


掴めず!
Cannot grab!

すり抜ける...お前の本来の右目の力か
"to through...that is the power of your right-eye"


カカシィ!!ナルトを時空間へ運べ!!
"Kakashi!! bring Naruto to another world!!"



オビトはあっちで九尾を渡すつもりなのか!神威!
"Obito tries to give Kyuubi there! Kamui!"


自ら飛ぶ時に体が実体化するのは知っている!
"i know you will be instantiate when you fly!"

うかつに時空間へ飛ぼうとすれば...そのスキを狙われる. 空間移動スピ-ドが遅すぎる...
if i fly to another world...maybe it is a chance for them. the speed of motion is too slow..."

一度仙人化しただけはある...ほんの少しだがオレからその力まで吸い取ったか
"you are strong enough, once became immortal...it was little but you sucked power from me..."


マダラあいつはいつでも私を殺せた...あまりの恐怖で息をするのも忘れてた......
"Madara...he could kill me...! i even forgot breathing because of fear...!!"


アイツ...アイツだけは...次元が違う!!
"him...only him...lives in different level!!"

ナルトは運んだ!後はお前が向こうへ飛べばナルトは助かるって事だな!?
"i carried Naruto! you meant that you go there also, Naruto will be saved, right?"

ああ任せろ
"yes, count on me..."

そして今回はおれがメインだ
"this time, i am main..."

オビト...カカシ...
"Obito...Kakashi..."

...オビト お前に預けたモノは全て返してもらう
"Obito, i swear i get back what i gave you"

特に左目がまだ 入っていなくてな...
"especially i still don't have my left-eye..."

気になるか?マダラ
"Do you wanna know it, Madara?"

写輪眼は左右揃って本来の力を発揮するもの...そう言ったよな
"Sharin Gan will perform fully when both of eyes are completed...as you said?"

...なら...
"...then..."

違う もう写輪眼ではない...輪廻眼だ
"No, it's not Sharin Gan anymore...it's Rinne Gan"

違う...
"No..."

こっちの事を言ってんだよ
"i'm talking about this"

やっと揃ったね!
"finally it"s completed!"


Can someone straigthen out my translations? - Tzadeck - 2014-03-01

Are you a native English speaker?


Can someone straigthen out my translations? - luke9t - 2014-03-01

I'm a native of english, not japanese


Can someone straigthen out my translations? - tokyostyle - 2014-03-01

There is a thread already set up for translation requests and this it not it.


Can someone straigthen out my translations? - Zgarbas - 2014-03-01

What tokyostyle said Smile Please go to the translation request thread. I quoted your post there.